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This Feeling

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Literature Text

This feeling that burns inside my heart,

my very soul.

It is horrible…

and yet delectable

at the very same time.

Every time I sense it,

I smile with pain.

I cry with happiness.

I collapse with emotion,

and I wonder…

What would we do without this feeling?

Without this miraculous,

enticing,

resplendent ardor?

Without this bitter sweet,

overpowering, life-changing compassion?

It is like a sour candy…

Luring you towards it.

Pungent,

yet irresistible.

It is like a tap…

drip-drip-dropping.

Irritating,

yet somehow always there.

It is like a sweet, sugary sundae…

Towering in all its tantalizing toppings.

Ineluctable,

but too much of it is damaging.

I collapse with this feeling inside me

and wonder… what would we do without this feeling we call
Love.

I wrote it ... in grade 8, so about a year and a half ago. I really like it, I hope you do.
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SSEJBAT's avatar
heh you capture the emotion well, the bitter-sweetness of the thing. relating it to food ia an iteresting concept and it works well!
i think we all wonder...