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This feeling that burns inside my heart,
my very soul.
It is horrible…
and yet delectable
at the very same time.
Every time I sense it,
I smile with pain.
I cry with happiness.
I collapse with emotion,
and I wonder…
What would we do without this feeling?
Without this miraculous,
enticing,
resplendent ardor?
Without this bitter sweet,
overpowering, life-changing compassion?
It is like a sour candy…
Luring you towards it.
Pungent,
yet irresistible.
It is like a tap…
drip-drip-dropping.
Irritating,
yet somehow always there.
It is like a sweet, sugary sundae…
Towering in all its tantalizing toppings.
Ineluctable,
but too much of it is damaging.
I collapse with this feeling inside me
and wonder… what would we do without this feeling we call
Love.
I wrote it ... in grade 8, so about a year and a half ago. I really like it, I hope you do.
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heh you capture the emotion well, the bitter-sweetness of the thing. relating it to food ia an iteresting concept and it works well!
i think we all wonder...
i think we all wonder...